On Sun, Apr 10, 2016 at 9:49 AM, Jean Weber <[email protected]> wrote: > On Sun, Apr 10, 2016 at 1:05 AM, Hazel Russman > <[email protected]> wrote: >> On Sat, 9 Apr 2016 18:47:25 -0700 >> Jean Weber <[email protected]> wrote: >> >>> I've now been through the Preface and Chapter 1 and placed them in the >>> Feedback folder. In the Preface I did not keep the changes Lera made >>> to remove "you" although I did change some wording differently to >>> removed a few. I also moved some details (about remote servers and the >>> LO open and save dialogs) from the Preface and put them in Chapter 1 >>> along with other information on that topic. >>> >>> In Chapter 1, I added a missing bit of information (the "Styles" item >>> on the menu bar) and corrected some other info about the menu bar >>> commands related to the changed location of some of them. I also >>> commented on one figure that is slightly wrong, that I did not notice >>> last time. And I revised some text slightly to removed a lot of >>> unnecessary "you"s. >>> >>> Someone else should check my work and fix the figure. I may have >>> missed some other necessary changes, and the English may need further >>> editing. >>> >>> I checked out Chapter 2 to look at tomorrow. >>> >>> I also updated the user guide tasks page on the wiki: >>> https://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Documentation/Development/UserGuideTasks >>> >>> --Jean >>> >> >> OK, I'll look at your version of chapter 1. Someone else can do the >> final check of the preface as it's already been through my hands. >> >> -- >> >> H Russman >> > > > Chapter 2, Setting up LO, is now in Feedback, ready for further review > and editing. I've checked out Ch3. > > --Jean
Chapter 3, Styles & Templates, is now in Feedback ready for further review and editing. --Jean -- To unsubscribe e-mail to: [email protected] Problems? http://www.libreoffice.org/get-help/mailing-lists/how-to-unsubscribe/ Posting guidelines + more: http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Netiquette List archive: http://listarchives.libreoffice.org/global/documentation/ All messages sent to this list will be publicly archived and cannot be deleted
