On Viernes 17 Diciembre 2010 04:15:40 Jesse Charbneau escribió:
> Hello,
>   I’ve been working off list with Gustavo, and we’d like to get some
> feedback on the design thats been worked out.
> 
> http://e-www.thecharbneaus.com/p.php?p=about&l=en

I like it. It might have too much text for my personal taste, but that's 
subjective. Regardless, here is some text I wrote for this when I was actively 
involved with the website that could be useful:

PNG (for easier reading): http://i.imgur.com/Bbfvy.png
HTML: http://pastebin.com/6X0eM9N7

Notice the additional links to pages that actually mention the EFL in relation 
to the products being pimped, I think that's important. Also, replacing the 
references to Yellow Dog Linux and Openmoko and with newer and more popular 
examples (like the ubuntu thingy) would be a good idea.

In an unrelated note: Is there a little love of the history of the project? A 
sub-page or something somewhere would make me a very happy panda.

PNG: http://i.imgur.com/gV5Dw.png
HTML: http://pastebin.com/JsLkKzQN

Everything I wrote, in both cases, might need a review since it was written a 
long time ago.

> http://e-www.thecharbneaus.com/p.php?p=download&l=en
> http://e-www.thecharbneaus.com/p.php?p=support&l=en

The content itself looks good, short and to the point but both of these layouts 
look awkward to me (specially download). I don't know if its a browser bug. 
Here are some screenshots:

http://i.imgur.com/SJ8qF.png
http://i.imgur.com/WyNbl.png

If you plan to keep the current header let me know and I will clean up the CSS 
for you since it was automatically generated using Sass[1]. It also contains 
various fixes to the main website and I never got around cleaning up or 
commenting either.

[1] http://sass-lang.com/

Thanks for your work and keep fighting the good fight. 








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