dear elham, Thanks for the effort you made. Let come to the subject,which you have to correct immediately.This will get an IELTS Score of 6.5 max.
1). i think you are following the writing style of your mother tongue.You have to change that immediately. 2).You are using lawyer's english.Use 8-10 at maximum words for each sentence. 3). The essay never reflect any main theme.You didn't mention which type of skill is the best for learning english faster. 4). Use active voice in writing,not the passive one. tojan for queries and information on IELTS visit www.http://www.yourieltsonline.com<http://www.http//www.yourieltsonline.com> On Tue, Jul 28, 2009 at 4:51 PM, Elham Moazzen <[email protected]>wrote: > * > ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- > * > > Linguistic scientists are conducting research about the effective ways of > learning English. These ways usually concentrate on a specific skill in > order to train students to use English as a second language effectively. > These skills are generally categorized in 4 groups of reading, listening, > speaking and writing. Some experts believe that learning with the most focus > on some of these skills will help to proceed faster than using another ones. > In my opinion, learning through reading as much comprehensible and > interesting texts as possible will fasten the process of learning English. > > Reading an article in English makes us familiar with language constructs > and also provides us with new words as well as they way of using them > correctly. Moreover, by reading again and again, our mind will automatically > be trained to make sentences in English properly due to the fact that It has > seen many correct samples before. The next effective way is through > listening understandable materials since it reviews all the structures, > grammar and new vocabulary we have already learned. Indeed, both reading and > listening to as much understandable English articles as possible will > improve our English fluency faster because they provide us with perfect > sources from native speakers. > > Then, the learner can try to write some essays or speak English in order to > practice what he has learned and find his mistakes. However, without a rich > background, which is acquired by reading and listening to English sources, > just practicing English by writing or speaking may not come handy to learn a > foreign language perfectly. > > In conclusion, although with each skill we can improve our English language > competency, in my opinion, Learning via reading is the most effective way to > achieve this goal. I think the more essays one reads, the fastest his > English fluency will improve. > > * > ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- > * > > > On Mon, Jul 27, 2009 at 12:12 PM, tojan antony <[email protected]>wrote: > >> i think your score for writing module is less. >> don't get worried. IELTS is the easiest exam available. >> >> As of now, focus on writing.i am giving you a topic.On one condition,If >> it's good then it will be published in in my website.Take it seriously. >> >> You have to write for 300 words.Your topic should contain the following. >> >> 1). Good vocabulary(Not superfluous). >> >> 2). In first paragraph you have to write the overview of the topic given >> 3). In second paragraph you have to write the arguments and reasons >> supporting your arguments. >> 4).In last paragraph you have to conclude with a small summary supporting >> your all arguments. >> >> >> Topic " With which skill you can learn english language >> faster.Listening,Reading,Writing or Speaking?. >> >> >> >> tojan >> >> >> >> >> >> >> >> >> >> >> >> >> >> >> >> >> >> >> >> On Mon, Jul 27, 2009 at 10:58 AM, Elham Moazzen <[email protected]>wrote: >> >>> Dear Tojan >>> >>> I have studied English for many years in different institutes, After >>> entering university, I didn't continue participating in classes instead I >>> used media like internet to study English. >>> >>> I think at the moment, I have the overall of 6.5 but I want to improve it >>> at least to 7. I am taking part in skill classes, and finished Reading and >>> studying writing now. But those classes because of the number of students do >>> not help me a lot. >>> >>> I especially need a good teacher to correct my writings. >>> >>> Regards >>> Elham >>> >>> >>> On Sun, Jul 26, 2009 at 9:52 PM, tojan antony <[email protected]>wrote: >>> >>>> Hai, >>>> >>>> For getting an overview, you can collect information from >>>> http://www.yourieltsonline.com >>>> >>>> To get a fair idea about your english skills, you have to give the >>>> following details. >>>> details of your schooling? >>>> experience with english language? >>>> Your interests like reading books, writing articles, writing jokes etc? >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> with regards >>>> tojan >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> On Sun, Jul 26, 2009 at 6:40 PM, Elham Moazzen >>>> <[email protected]>wrote: >>>> >>>>> Dear Tojan >>>>> Seeing your email really surprised me, because I am taking my IELTS >>>>> exam in the end of September and I need a lot of help to improve my >>>>> writing. >>>>> *I really need your hellp.* >>>>> Will you please do me a favor and aid me to get 7 ? >>>>> I need 7 to apply for Canadian universities for Ph.D. of Software >>>>> Engineering. >>>>> I am interestingly looking forward to hearing from you. >>>>> Elham >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> On Mon, Jul 20, 2009 at 8:38 AM, to...@yourieltsonline < >>>>> [email protected]> wrote: >>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> Hai, >>>>>> >>>>>> I am tojan. I am an IELTS Trainer and owner of website on IELTS named >>>>>> http://www.yourieltsonline.com >>>>>> >>>>>> i have vast experience in IELTS exams and spend atleast a couple of >>>>>> hours in studying and preparing study materials for exam aspirants. >>>>>> >>>>>> I would like to share my experience and knowledge with you all . >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> Best wishes >>>>>> >>>>>> Tojan >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> -- >>>>>> >>>>>> "When you know what you want,and you want it badly enough,you'll find >>>>>> a way to get it." >>>>>> >>>>>> "Successful leaders have the courage to take action while others >>>>>> hesitate." >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>> >>> >>> -- >>> >>> "When you know what you want,and you want it badly enough,you'll find a >>> way to get it." >>> >>> "Successful leaders have the courage to take action while others >>> hesitate." >>> >>> >>> >> >> >> > > > -- > > "When you know what you want,and you want it badly enough,you'll find a way > to get it." > > "Successful leaders have the courage to take action while others hesitate." > > > > --~--~---------~--~----~------------~-------~--~----~ You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "ESL Podcast". 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