The 2nd logo is ok but I don't like the font used, I would much prefer
the 3rd logo font for example. And perhaps, the star is too small ?..
a variation on it with a couple
of smaller star could be interesting too (after all, étoilé means
starred) ?
Ok, I played a bit with omnigraffle, and here is an attempt to a logo
combining
the 2nd logo and more stars:
http://dromasoftware.com/etoile/diagrams/Logo2.png
I'm not fond of the font, the 3rd logo font is better imho, but I
don't have it :D
You don't have it because there is no font that looks like that :)
(It's a variation of a font called Boks who's letterforms I specially
modified just for this logo)
Here are three new versions for round 2:
http://www.jesseross.com/clients/etoile/logo/
Also, I didn't do any versions with multiple sizes of stars because,
with the font from 03 anyway, there is no line variation, so I wanted
to have the icons (the stars) mimic the quality of line in the font by
being consistently sized. Additionally, we're going to have
reproducibility issues if we start making shapes any smaller than they
currently are.
One more thing: next round of revisions is the last round, so get your
feedback in now or suffer the consequences of silence :)
J.
