It's not a mixed metaphor, but I do prefer your version. --- In FairfieldLife@yahoogroups.com, "Llundrub" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > > no ill, yet he sticks the knife in at every opportunity he gets -- > stabbing with a > smile -- thus adding the stain of hypocrisy to the stench of > betrayal. > > ------As a literature student I object to the mixed metaphors as it sounds like something an old folks home orderly would say. To make it a complete thought could you add stealing people's narcotics and pupils pinpointed from phenylpropoxiphene, or something? Like this: > > Rick, crazed orderly in the old folks home of the Devas where Maharishi is head shrink, takes every opportunity to pop phenylpropoxiphene by the rolls and with pinpointed pupils of dangerous depositions seeks to stab the yellow skinned old cast off TM Peace Givernment, Charlie-horsing them while twisting their yellowed and piss stained diapers, all the while laughing maniacally at the head shrink making signs of Satan in the headlights of samsaric cars backlit through dim windows on the hallway walls. > > Or something like that.
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