I liked your magician books. I think that overall, they were quite well done. That being said, I did feel they lacked the starting flourish of a series like the Harry Potter books. The magician books were more down to earth on the whole, and though they had their fair share of mystery they also didn't really compare to something like the mistborn trilogy in their ability to intrique. Also, a solid chunk of the magician books were relatively slow. That is not necessarily a bad thing, but would inhibit readers from picking it up.
To be completely honest, out of that series my favorite book was A Darkness at Sethanon and my least favorite was Silverthorn. I really felt like the characters were a bit lost in Silverthorn and I also didn't like the feel of helplessness that went with them being assaulted by powerful magic with little ability to defend themselves. Jimmy was definitely the strength of this book, but on the whole it just felt bland. I also did not find the journey to be that enjoyable, nor did I like that magic from Pantathian priests could so overwhelm a monastary that had been steeped in magical power for centuries. I kind of felt the power of the Pantathian priests not very believable. On the other hand, Darkness had a much more interesting journey. I absolutely loved Armengar from start to finish. The whole series of events in Armengar gave the book an epic feel. I also very much enjoyed the culmination of the book with the invasion of Sethanon. I felt like every character in this book was deep and had a reason, and story, behind their actions. It was a much more intense book than the previous three and you really did a great job w/ it. I think JK Rowling got a bit lucky, to be honest. I found her books to be good, but nothing extraordinary. I've read quite a few fantasy novels I much prefer over hers, and the last book was extremely disappointing. The whole mechanic with the wand felt cheap and cheesy to me. Lose your wand and you have zip for magical power. To be honest, the wand mechanic was one of the things I disliked most about her books. Instead of getting your magical power from within, you get it from a wand that can be broken like a twig (always drove me crazy every time someone got owned cause they dropped their wand). That being said, she had some great characters. Professor Snape was easily my favorite, but I also thought Hermione was quite good (though I felt Hermione should have been more relavant in a lot of the fights w/ the dark forces). The last thing I'd say is it always felt to me like Harry Potter was tagging along. Dumbledore would tell him what to do, give him hints, and then he would do it. Harry Potter would get in a fight and be saved by one of the powerful wizards at the academy. In general, he seemed hopelessly outmarched by every situation he was in. Throughout the books, I felt like he was in for the ride and not actually a main character. He just felt shallow to me. On Wed, Dec 21, 2011 at 1:45 PM, Raymond E. Feist <[email protected]>wrote: > > On Dec 20, 2011, at 2:04 PM, Scott Norris wrote: > > > You're saying you need to work on your charm but you date women half > your age... > > > > > > now I'm really confused. > > > > > > > > ;-D > > > > > > Scott45 > > > > > Everywhere you go, smart alecs. > > Look, I think there was a lot of charm in Magician,because of the two main > characters, and in Silverthorn and Darkness because of who Jimmy was. I > intentionally didn't make the twins or Erik and Roo "charming" and it's > been pretty dark since then. > > Rowlings had a lot of the same issues; Goblet of fire was the last > "charming book" where they were still kids, but Order of the Phoenix turned > very dark and from there . . . > > Still, she had this charming foundation that echoed in the narrative of > the later books. > > My situation in real life has nothing to do with the work. > > And it's 1/3rd my age if you must know. > > Best, R.E.F. > ---- > www.crydee.com > > Never attribute to malice what can satisfactorily be explained away by > stupidity. > > > > > > > >
