On Feb 18, 2012, at 10:16 AM, Michael Busby wrote: > > spoiler space > > > - > - > - > - > - > - > - > - > - > - > - > - > - > - > - > - > - > - > - > - > - > - > - > - > - > - > > I feel bad to point out issues in the work since the books are fantastic > but... > > At the end of 'a kingdom besieged' Child asks Belog for an orange, he > reaches at his ever present bag and it wasn't there. > > When Amirantha is trying to banish Child and Belog, Belog throws an > orange out of his bag, and later talks about the rift in the bottom. but, he > didn't have one. > > Michael Busby.
Welcome to the world of overediting. I must have cut the line earlier where he figured out how to do the rift thing. There was a lot of stuff that I juggled trying to demonstrate they were slowly learning their human counterpart's stuff, climaxed at the scene when Nakor tells Miranda to stop trying and just do it. It was sort of his Yoda moment. Best, R.E.F. ---- www.crydee.com Never attribute to malice what can satisfactorily be explained away by stupidity.
