Well, just enough survived of chapter 2 to tell me two things:
1: You're using the dub names, which automatically fails this fic.
2: What little of it came through displayed a thoroughly uninteresting
premise. Even if you get the posting bug worked out, I doubt I'd have read
it.
In other words, you might as well leave it all fucked up and
Cthulu-summoning-ritual looking. It's the best thing this story has going
for it. :)
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