That all looks fine to me. I can't second-guess the layout without trying it myself, but with that level of density I might have attempted 4 lines of 3 bars each. It's very clear as it is, especially the rhythm hits.
There are two little details I might have done differently. One is, Finale flips the ties and stems when there is another layer, but this is an exception to that rule. I would flip them all back again (the ties are only a minute with the Special Tool, or you can adjust the Layer Attributes in Doc Options.) If there are collisions with chord hits you can move the chord hits a bit higher. The other is I would rather not see the 3rd beat obscured with 8th-note subdivisions present, such as the double-dotted note in bar 7, which I would have written as dotted quarter tied to half. Are you sure about the title in French? "Femmes de Disparaissent" is not correct French, but it may have been Golson's error and been documented like that (like Parker's "Au Privave") in which case of course it must stay like that. Christopher On 21-Apr-14, at 21-Apr-14 8:19 AM, Girard Bowe wrote: > I used Darcy's & Steve's suggestions for the Blues on My Mind > leadsheet, and > here is the result: > > http://freejazzinstitute.com/showposts.php?dept=transcriptions > > Thanks again - I'm open to comments regarding the look - would you > have laid > it out this way? > > Giz > Richmond VA > > |-----Original Message----- > |From: finale-boun...@shsu.edu [mailto:finale-boun...@shsu.edu] On > Behalf Of > |Darcy James Argue > |Sent: Thursday, April 17, 2014 1:40 AM > |To: finale@shsu.edu > |Subject: Re: [Finale] Ossias, I think > | > |Don't use the Ossia Tool. Put the kicks in a separate layer above > staff, > reduce size, > |and use the "Hide Ledger Lines" plugin. > > > _______________________________________________ > Finale mailing list > Finale@shsu.edu > https://lists.shsu.edu/mailman/listinfo/finale > > To unsubscribe from finale send a message to: > finale-unsubscr...@shsu.edu > _______________________________________________ Finale mailing list Finale@shsu.edu https://lists.shsu.edu/mailman/listinfo/finale To unsubscribe from finale send a message to: finale-unsubscr...@shsu.edu
