One additional thought: Despite what I said in my previous post, I agree with Jeremy. Your editor's construction is also not correct. You should not be using either "and" OR "then" with conditional construct statements. In this case, your editor's position (on reading closer) is worse than the one you have been using. But it may turn out that neither is really grammatically correct.
BTW, I can't say what the Chicago Manual of Style says about such things, because I do not have one handy, but it might be interesting to see what that style guide says about this... Cheers, Chuck Beck -----Original Message----- Subject: Re: OT: Syntax for if/then statement On Thu, 29 Jun 2006 11:22:20 -0600, Tammy.VanBoening at jeppesen.com wrote: >Our new editor wants to add the word "and" to such statements - if ><blah, blah>, AND then <blah, blah>. Both I and the other writer >disagree with the editor on this one - it should be just if/then - no >"and." Yikes. You don't have to look for specific refs for geekspeak, this is just plain bad grammar. Look at a grammar reference. You don't use "and" to separate a conditional clause from the rest of its sentence! I'd seriously wonder if this person were qualified to edit *anything*. ;-) -- Jeremy H. Griffith, at Omni Systems Inc. <jeremy at omsys.com> http://www.omsys.com/
