Hi Tom.

The process and tone I'm trying to go for myself in the sample I'm working on is much more, "computers do lots of good stuff, have you ever thought of playing games with them?" type of approach, starting with perhaps what the person has been told, or if the person is not a computer user, starting with the general and working to the specific.

I'm not entirely happy with the word order yet but as I said that is why I am trying to be as careful as I can about draughting this thing.

Beware the grue!

Dark.

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