To be honest I never minded the pronowns myself, to my mind either is acceptable.

"I" is from the perspective that it is you the reviewer sharing our knolidge about the game, where as if you say "you" to the audience you are talking directly to them, while "we" implies both the listener and the reviewer playing and participating in the game. All of which are to my mind quite legitimate ways of speaking, and I've myself used both in reviews before, indeed sometimes I've alternated in pronown use when it seemed appropriate, for instance saying "you" when I am recommending a course of action to the listener, and using "I" when I am playing the game and talking about what I'm doing myself in the review.

Beware the grue!

Dark.
----- Original Message ----- From: "Phil Vlasak" <[email protected]>
To: "Gamers Discussion list" <[email protected]>
Sent: Sunday, December 09, 2012 1:12 AM
Subject: Re: [Audyssey] Shades of doom audio review.


Hi Lori,
I didn't notice the buzz after you started the game.
In your demonstration, I think it's better to say I rather than you. You say I in most places but not in this section,

This passage has alcoves that are open off to the left and right.
Sometimes there's monsters hiding here.
They like nothing better than than to leap out on you.
This time we're fine.
There's a border just before you hit a wall.

If you said it in first person it would be,
This passage has alcoves that are open off to the left and right.
Sometimes I find monsters hiding here.
They like nothing better than than to leap out on me.
This time I'm fine.
There's a border just before I hit a wall.


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