Mary, Following the link to the draft tracker:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/public/pidtracker.cgi?command=view_id&dTag= 13731&rfc_flag=0 This is what I found in the tracker: [EMAIL PROTECTED] [IN IESG DISCUSSION *discuss*] This is not the version that should be approved. See instead draft-kosonen-mobile-xmf-mediatype-01 John >-----Original Message----- >From: ext Mary Barnes [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] >Sent: 07 June, 2006 16:18 >To: Loughney John (Nokia-NRC/Helsinki); [email protected] >Cc: [EMAIL PROTECTED]; Kosonen Timo (Nokia-NRC/Tampere); [EMAIL PROTECTED] >Subject: RE: [Gen-art] Gen-Art review of >draft-kosonen-mobile-xmf-mimetype-01.txt > >John, > >Can you please clarify which document/version this review >applies to (i.e, mimetype-00 or mediatype-01)? > >Thanks, >Mary > >-----Original Message----- >From: [EMAIL PROTECTED] [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] >Sent: Wednesday, June 07, 2006 5:12 AM >To: [email protected] >Cc: [EMAIL PROTECTED]; [EMAIL PROTECTED]; [EMAIL PROTECTED] >Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-Art review of >draft-kosonen-mobile-xmf-mimetype-01.txt > > >I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for >draft-kosonen-mobile-xmf-mediatype-01.txt. >For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at ><http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html>. > >Please wait for direction from your document shepherd >or AD before posting a new version of the draft. > >I would suggest that a DISCUSS be issued on the document, based upon >the four points below. These should be relatively easy to fix, though. > >1) The abstract has references and some abbreivatiations, for example >XMF. > I would suggest to rewrite the abstract without the references, and > expand XMF, so that readers unfamiliar with the details would at >least > understand (at a high-level) what the document is trying to do. > >2) IANA Considerations section should explicitly state the MIME subtype >details, > and information into which registry it should be placed. > >3) Security considerations section - would general MIME threats be >applicable for > this document? > >4) What is meant by the "Change controller:" section? > >thanks, >John > >_______________________________________________ >Gen-art mailing list >[email protected] >https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art > _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
