Hi all, After some discussions, I need to modify my review. I only have one issue with the draft. The updated review is as follows
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for draft-kosonen-mobile-xmf-mediatype-01.txt. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html>. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. The draft is OK, with one point that can be updated during AUTH48. 1) The abstract has references and some abbreivatiations, for example XMF. I would suggest to rewrite the abstract without the references, and expand XMF, so that readers unfamiliar with the details would at least understand (at a high-level) what the document is trying to do. thanks, John _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
