Gen-ART review of draft-hollenbeck-epp-rfc3733bis-05 I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-hollenbeck-epp-rfc3733bis-05 Reviewer: Pasi Eronen Review Date: 2006-11-27 IESG Telechat date: 2006-11-30 Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. Comments: I reviewed version -04 of this document already during IETF Last Call; here's a link to my earlier review: http://www1.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/gen-art/current/msg01390.html Most of my comments have been addressed, but I have two remaining nits: 1) The document is not quite consistent on whether the XML document MUST use UTF-8 encoding, or whether other encodings are allowed (and UTF-8 is just the recommended encoding). The author indicated that "MUST use UTF-8" is the right interpretation, but there's some text that needs to be fixed to take this into account. 2) The reference to E.164 is still not quite right: the current title/date refer are of E.164.1, while the right document to cite here would be (AFAIK) E.164. Its title would be "The international public telecommunication numbering plan" and date 02/2005. If there's no disagreement about comment 1, both of these could be handled just fine with an RFC editor note. Best regards, Pasi _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
