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Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-reconfigure-rebind-09.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20120407 IETF LC End Date: 20120412 IESG Telechat date: 20120412 Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: Note I know very well DHCPv6 so some details could have been too obvious for me... - Abstract page 1: RFC 3315 -> RFC 3315 (DHCPv6) - Introduction page 4: msg-type -> message type - Introduction page 4: I'd like to get a better name for T1 but as far as I know it has no name, so I propose: T1 -> the timer T1. - 5 page 6: I don't understand (i.e., wording problem) "ignores" in: ... If the client does not receive a response from the server by the end of the retransmission process, the client ignores and discards the Reconfigure message. - 7 page 6: IMHO the fake Reconfigure message is already a known threat (but I have no concern to see it explained again) Thanks [email protected] _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
