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Document: draft-ietf-geopriv-dhcp-lbyr-uri-option-15
Reviewer: Alexey Melnikov
Review Date: 2012-06-09
IETF LC End Date: 2012-06-14
IESG Telechat date: (if known)
Summary: This document is nearly ready for publication as a Proposed
Standard.
Major issues: None
Minor issues:
In Section 1: the first reference to URI needs a Normative reference.
The whole document is about passing URIs and they are not defined anywhere.
In Section 2.3: LuriType =1 description says that the value is UTF-8.
This is not correct, URIs never contain non-ASCII values. So please
either say ASCII, or use IRI if you really meant UTF-8 (but use of IRIs
would be horrible, so don't).
LuriType=2: in network byte order?
In Section 3.2: "data:" URI needs an Informative reference (RFC 2397).
In Section 3.3: all media types mentioned (two?) need Normative references.
Nits/editorial comments:
In Section 3, 2nd to the last para: s/deference/dereference ?
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