Alexey: The telechat is less that 24 hours away. I hope you are online and can reply soon.
Russ On Feb 4, 2013, at 2:01 PM, Russ Housley wrote: > Alexey: > > I have not seen a reply to this review. Are your concerns resolved in the > current version? > > Russ > > On Jun 9, 2012, at 12:47 PM, Alexey Melnikov wrote: > >> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on >> Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at >> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. >> >> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments >> you may receive. >> >> Document: draft-ietf-geopriv-dhcp-lbyr-uri-option-15 >> Reviewer: Alexey Melnikov >> Review Date: 2012-06-09 >> IETF LC End Date: 2012-06-14 >> IESG Telechat date: (if known) >> >> Summary: This document is nearly ready for publication as a Proposed >> Standard. >> >> Major issues: None >> >> Minor issues: >> >> In Section 1: the first reference to URI needs a Normative reference. The >> whole document is about passing URIs and they are not defined anywhere. >> >> In Section 2.3: LuriType =1 description says that the value is UTF-8. This >> is not correct, URIs never contain non-ASCII values. So please either say >> ASCII, or use IRI if you really meant UTF-8 (but use of IRIs would be >> horrible, so don't). >> >> LuriType=2: in network byte order? >> >> In Section 3.2: "data:" URI needs an Informative reference (RFC 2397). >> >> In Section 3.3: all media types mentioned (two?) need Normative references. >> >> >> Nits/editorial comments: >> >> In Section 3, 2nd to the last para: s/deference/dereference ? >> >> _______________________________________________ >> Gen-art mailing list >> [email protected] >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
