Alexey: I have not seen a reply to this review. Are your concerns resolved in the current version?
Russ On Jun 9, 2012, at 12:47 PM, Alexey Melnikov wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on > Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at > <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments > you may receive. > > Document: draft-ietf-geopriv-dhcp-lbyr-uri-option-15 > Reviewer: Alexey Melnikov > Review Date: 2012-06-09 > IETF LC End Date: 2012-06-14 > IESG Telechat date: (if known) > > Summary: This document is nearly ready for publication as a Proposed Standard. > > Major issues: None > > Minor issues: > > In Section 1: the first reference to URI needs a Normative reference. The > whole document is about passing URIs and they are not defined anywhere. > > In Section 2.3: LuriType =1 description says that the value is UTF-8. This is > not correct, URIs never contain non-ASCII values. So please either say ASCII, > or use IRI if you really meant UTF-8 (but use of IRIs would be horrible, so > don't). > > LuriType=2: in network byte order? > > In Section 3.2: "data:" URI needs an Informative reference (RFC 2397). > > In Section 3.3: all media types mentioned (two?) need Normative references. > > > Nits/editorial comments: > > In Section 3, 2nd to the last para: s/deference/dereference ? > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
