I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-eman-requirements-10.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20130125 IETF LC End Date: 20120125 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - ToC page 2: very inconsistent use of caps: I propose to put the first letter of all words in upper cases. And of course apply this to titles (in the very unlikely case the ToC is not auto generated) - ToC page 3 and 11 page 23: Acknowledgements -? Acknowledgments - 1 page 4: IT -> Information Technology - 1 page 4 and others: why Power State and not power state? I believe it comes from a document where you imported the term from? - 12 pages 23 and 24: Telcommunication -> Telecommunication (twice) - Authors' Addresses: please use the full names of countries (surface mail was not yet converted to ISO IS 3166 as far as I know :), so: DE -> Germany IN -> India (or Republic of India?) BE -> Belgium Regards [email protected] _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
