In your previous mail you wrote:

>  > - ToC page 3 and 11 page 23: Acknowledgements -? Acknowledgments
>  
>  Well, both is possible.  I changed it as suggested.

=> it is a standard US vs UK English...

>  > - 1 page 4 and others: why Power State and not power state? I believe it
>  >  comes from a document where you imported the term from?
>  
>  The capitalized term is defined in the terminology section.  Is this OK?

=> it is OK (and a point for the RFC Editor): I just wanted to understand.

Thanks

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