Hi Francis, Thanks a lot for the review. Please see replies inline.
On 28.01.13 16:41, "Francis Dupont" <[email protected]> wrote: > >I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on >Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at > ><http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > >Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments >you may receive. > >Document: draft-ietf-eman-requirements-10.txt >Reviewer: Francis Dupont >Review Date: 20130125 >IETF LC End Date: 20120125 >IESG Telechat date: unknown > >Summary: Ready > >Major issues: None > >Minor issues: None > >Nits/editorial comments: > - ToC page 2: very inconsistent use of caps: I propose to put the first >letter > of all words in upper cases. And of course apply this to titles (in the >very > unlikely case the ToC is not auto generated) Fixed as proposed. > - ToC page 3 and 11 page 23: Acknowledgements -? Acknowledgments Well, both is possible. I changed it as suggested. > - 1 page 4: IT -> Information Technology Changed. > > - 1 page 4 and others: why Power State and not power state? I believe it > comes from a document where you imported the term from? The capitalized term is defined in the terminology section. Is this OK? > - 12 pages 23 and 24: Telcommunication -> Telecommunication (twice) Fixed, even three times. > > - Authors' Addresses: please use the full names of countries (surface >mail > was not yet converted to ISO IS 3166 as far as I know :), so: > DE -> Germany > IN -> India (or Republic of India?) > BE -> Belgium Done. Mouli, I used India. Is this correct or do we have to use "Republic of India"? Thanks, Juergen > >Regards > >[email protected] _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
