In message <[email protected]> Francis Dupont writes: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on > Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at > > <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments > you may receive. > > Document: draft-ietf-rtgwg-cl-requirement-10.txt > Reviewer: Francis Dupont > Review Date: 20130617 > IETF LC End Date: 20130619 > IESG Telechat date: unknown > > Summary: Ready > > Major issues: None > > Minor issues: None
OK. Thanks but it appears the document is headed back to another WGLC due to other comments, mostly due to the RtgDir review comments. > Nits/editorial comments: > - ToC page 3 and 7 page 12: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments It appears that both spellings are acceptable according to my spell checker. I will leave as is unless there is continued objection. > - 2 page 4: double include words in: > > The services supported include pseudowire based services (RFC 3985 > [RFC3985]), including VPN services, > > I suggest something like: > > The supported services are, but not limited to, pseudowire based > services (RFC 3985 [RFC3985]), including VPN services, Thank you. I will make this change. > - 3 page 5 (component link): the term NPO is used before being defined > > - 3 page 5 (component link): expand the WDM abbrev -- not well known > according tothe RFC Editor list: > http://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc-style-guide/abbrev.expansion.txt > > - 3 page 5 (flow identification): same for the PW abbrev A last call comment from our AD is to expand all acronyms before use. The SecDir comments also requested this. > - 4.1 page 6: CAN -> MAY Thank you. I will make this change. > - 6 page 12 (MR#10) -> interpretted -> interpreted Thank you. My spell checker agrees. I will make this change. > - 9 page 13: Encrption -> Encryption Thank you. I obviously didn't make spell check corrections in a recent edit. I will make this change. I will also do a full spell check and see what else the spell checker find. (I am using International Ispell Version 3.3.02 12 Jun 2005 with English and American English dictionary files). > - Authors' Addresses: add the country (USA) in postal addresses Thank you. I will make this change. > Regards > > [email protected] Thank you for the review of this document. Curtis _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
