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Document: draft-ietf-repute-query-http-09 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2013-08-29 IETF LC End Date: 2013-08-29 IESG Telechat date: 2013-09-12 Summary: This draft is almost ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some comments. Nits/editorial comments: Nits: -[Page 4], line 2, "attributies" --typo-->"attributes" -[Page 4], line 8, "support support" ----> remove duplicate -[Page 4], line 5 before last, "is cable of" ----->"is capable of" -[Page 4], line 4 before last, "until finds" ----->"until it finds" -[Page 5], Section 3.3, line 2, "[URI-TEMPLATE]. (See Section 3.2.) ", misplaced dot after the reference. -[Page 6], line 2, "An media" --typo-->"A media" comments: -Not sure if it was forgotten or by choice: second author's affiliation is missing. -Suggestion: for references to RFCs, it is better to use the [RFC####] as reference in the text instead of ["name"]. -Section 4, please double check to make sure RFC5226 is followed. -Appendix B, not sure if necessary since it is the WGs list and not some other mailing list. Best Regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com<http://www.ericsson.com>
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