Thanks for the review, Meral. Answers inline. On Thu, Aug 29, 2013 at 1:25 AM, Meral Shirazipour < [email protected]> wrote:
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on > Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at > http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq .**** > > Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you > may receive.**** > > ** ** > > Document: draft-ietf-repute-query-http-09**** > > Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour**** > > Review Date: 2013-08-29**** > > IETF LC End Date: 2013-08-29**** > > IESG Telechat date: 2013-09-12**** > > ** ** > > ** ** > > Summary:**** > > This draft is almost ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I > have some comments.**** > > ** ** > > ** ** > > Nits/editorial comments:**** > > Nits:**** > > -[Page 4], line 2, "attributies" --typo-->"attributes"**** > > -[Page 4], line 8, "support support" ----> remove duplicate**** > > -[Page 4], line 5 before last, "is cable of" ----->"is capable of"**** > > -[Page 4], line 4 before last, "until finds" ----->"until it finds"**** > > -[Page 5], Section 3.3, line 2, "[URI-TEMPLATE]. (See Section 3.2.) ", > misplaced dot after the reference.**** > > -[Page 6], line 2, "An media" --typo-->"A media" > All fixed. > **** > > ** ** > > comments:**** > > -Not sure if it was forgotten or by choice: second author's affiliation is > missing. > This was intentional. > **** > > -Suggestion: for references to RFCs, it is better to use the [RFC####] as > reference in the text instead of ["name"]. > This seems to be a stylistic choice; all of mine so far have used names. > **** > > -Section 4, please double check to make sure RFC5226 is followed. > Is there something in particular that was missed? There's only a single action here, and it's pretty simple at that. > **** > > -Appendix B, not sure if necessary since it is the WGs list and not some > other mailing list. > I've tagged it for the RFC Editor to remove it prior to publication. Thanks again, -MSK
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