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Document: draft-ietf-v6ops-rfc3316bis-03
Reviewer: Alexey Melnikov
Review Date: 30 August 2013
IETF LC End Date: 2 September 2013
IESG Telechat date: 12 September 2013
Summary: Ready with nits.
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits:
In 1.1
This document complements the IPv6 node requirements [RFC6434] in
places where clarifications are needed the with discussion on the use
Delete "the" before "with"?
of these selected IPv6 specifications when operating over a cellular
interface.
In 2.2:
RTP and SIP need Informative references.
In 2.4:
PPP needs an Informative reference.
Also, where is IPv6CP defined?
Appendix B. Changes to RFC 3316
I think that before publication this section needs to be reworked a bit
to have a single list of changes, referencing particular draft versions
is not going to be very useful in the final RFC.
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