Thank you Alexey for your comments! jari
On Aug 30, 2013, at 2:42 PM, Jouni Korhonen <[email protected]> wrote: > > Thanks Alexey, > > We'll take care of these comments asap. > > - Jouni > > > On Aug 30, 2013, at 2:31 PM, Alexey Melnikov <[email protected]> > wrote: > >> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on >> Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at >> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> >> >> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you >> may receive. >> >> Document: draft-ietf-v6ops-rfc3316bis-03 >> Reviewer: Alexey Melnikov >> Review Date: 30 August 2013 >> IETF LC End Date: 2 September 2013 >> IESG Telechat date: 12 September 2013 >> >> Summary: Ready with nits. >> >> Major issues: None >> >> Minor issues: None >> >> Nits: >> >> In 1.1 >> >> This document complements the IPv6 node requirements [RFC6434] in >> places where clarifications are needed the with discussion on the use >> >> Delete "the" before "with"? >> >> of these selected IPv6 specifications when operating over a cellular >> interface. >> >> In 2.2: >> >> RTP and SIP need Informative references. >> >> In 2.4: >> >> PPP needs an Informative reference. >> >> Also, where is IPv6CP defined? >> >> >> Appendix B. Changes to RFC 3316 >> >> I think that before publication this section needs to be reworked a bit to >> have a single list of changes, referencing particular draft versions is not >> going to be very useful in the final RFC. > _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
