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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
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Document: draft-ietf-ecrit-unauthenticated-access-07.txt
Reviewer: Alexey Melnikov
Review Date: 3 October 2013
IETF LC End Date: 27 September 2013
IESG Telechat date: N/A
Summary: Ready with nits
Major issues: None
Minor issues:
Nits/editorial comments:
In Section 1: the acronym VSP is not defined. (It is defined in a later
section.)
In Section 6.1: EAP has no reference.
In Section 5.2: EAP-TLS needs an Informative reference.
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