Hi Alexey,
thanks for the review. I have incorporated your comments in the updated version. I will have to incorporate the comments from Richard as well before I submit a new version.
Ciao Hannes On 03.10.2013 12:37, Alexey Melnikov wrote:
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-ecrit-unauthenticated-access-07.txt Reviewer: Alexey Melnikov Review Date: 3 October 2013 IETF LC End Date: 27 September 2013 IESG Telechat date: N/A Summary: Ready with nits Major issues: None Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: In Section 1: the acronym VSP is not defined. (It is defined in a later section.) In Section 6.1: EAP has no reference. In Section 5.2: EAP-TLS needs an Informative reference.
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