Thank you for the review and updates! Jari
On Oct 3, 2013, at 8:29 AM, Hannes Tschofenig <[email protected]> wrote: > > Hi Alexey, > > thanks for the review. I have incorporated your comments in the updated > version. I will have to incorporate the comments from Richard as well before > I submit a new version. > > Ciao > Hannes > > On 03.10.2013 12:37, Alexey Melnikov wrote: >> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on >> Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at >> >> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. >> >> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments >> you may receive. >> >> Document: draft-ietf-ecrit-unauthenticated-access-07.txt >> Reviewer: Alexey Melnikov >> Review Date: 3 October 2013 >> IETF LC End Date: 27 September 2013 >> IESG Telechat date: N/A >> >> Summary: Ready with nits >> >> Major issues: None >> >> Minor issues: >> >> Nits/editorial comments: >> >> In Section 1: the acronym VSP is not defined. (It is defined in a later >> section.) >> >> In Section 6.1: EAP has no reference. >> >> In Section 5.2: EAP-TLS needs an Informative reference. > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
