On 7/9/14, 7:16 AM, Romascanu, Dan (Dan) wrote:
OK, I accept this, but in this case the text in the I-D should probably
be worded slightly different:
> > The WebSocket XMPP sub-protocol deviates from the standard method of
> > constructing and using XML streams as defined in [RFC6120] by
> > adopting the message framing provided by WebSocket to delineate the
> > stream open and close headers, stanzas, and other top-level stream
> > elements.
‘deviates’ IMO suggests a change to the base specification, not just an
optional new binding.
How about this:
OLD
The WebSocket XMPP sub-protocol deviates from the standard method of
constructing and using XML streams as defined in [RFC6120] by
adopting the message framing provided by WebSocket to delineate the
stream open and close headers, stanzas, and other top-level stream
elements.
NEW
The framing method for the binding of XMPP to WebSocket differs
from the framing method for the TCP binding as defined in [RFC6120];
in particular, the WebSocket binding adopts the message framing
provided by WebSocket to delineate the stream open and close
headers, stanzas, and other top-level stream elements.
Peter
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