wfm Thanks and Regards,
Dan > -----Original Message----- > From: Peter Saint-Andre [mailto:[email protected]] > Sent: Wednesday, July 09, 2014 5:39 PM > To: Romascanu, Dan (Dan); Richard Barnes; Dave Cridland > Cc: [email protected]; [email protected]; Jari > Arkko; [email protected] > Subject: Re: [xmpp] [Gen-art] Gen-ART review for draft-ietf-xmpp- > websocket-07 > > On 7/9/14, 7:16 AM, Romascanu, Dan (Dan) wrote: > > OK, I accept this, but in this case the text in the I-D should > > probably be worded slightly different: > > > > > > The WebSocket XMPP sub-protocol deviates from the standard > method > > of > > > > > > constructing and using XML streams as defined in [RFC6120] by > > > > > > adopting the message framing provided by WebSocket to delineate > the > > > > > > stream open and close headers, stanzas, and other top-level stream > > > > > > elements. > > > > 'deviates' IMO suggests a change to the base specification, not just > > an optional new binding. > > How about this: > > OLD > The WebSocket XMPP sub-protocol deviates from the standard method of > constructing and using XML streams as defined in [RFC6120] by > adopting the message framing provided by WebSocket to delineate the > stream open and close headers, stanzas, and other top-level stream > elements. > > NEW > The framing method for the binding of XMPP to WebSocket differs > from the framing method for the TCP binding as defined in [RFC6120]; > in particular, the WebSocket binding adopts the message framing > provided by WebSocket to delineate the stream open and close > headers, stanzas, and other top-level stream elements. > > Peter _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
