Thanks for your review. (Have the authors seen the editorial nits? None of them are significant to worry about, but just wanted to ensure that e-mails are being seen.)
Jari On 10 Oct 2014, at 15:56, Meral Shirazipour <[email protected]> wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, > please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. > > Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may > receive. > > Document: draft-ietf-uta-tls-attacks-04 > Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour > Review Date: 2014-10-10 > IETF LC End Date: 2014-10-13 > IESG Telechat date: 2014-10-16 > > > Summary: > This draft is ready to be published as Informational RFC, but I have some > editorial comments . > > > Nits/editorial comments: > Nits: > -Abstract, please spell out Transport Layer Security (TLS) and Datagram > Transport Layer Security (DTLS), perhaps in Title too. > -Same comment for other acronyms, please spell out at first use: UTA work > group, SSL, NSA, Cipher Block Chaining (CBC),Message Authentication Code > (MAC), Cross-Site Request Forgery (CSRF),etc. > > -[Page 5], Section 2.6 > The below sentence was not clear-it would be good to add something about the > recommendation related to this statement. > " > For example, implementations of HTTP that use CSRF tokens > will need to randomize them even when the recommendations of > [I-D.ietf-uta-tls-bcp] are adopted. > > " > -[Page 5], Section 2.10, please do not forget to add reference for TRIPLE-HS. > > -[Page 6], Section 2.11, suggestion: > "other than originally intended"---->"other than the one originally intended" > > -[Page 7], Section 3, suggestion > "adaptation of TLS for UDP datagrams."--->"adaptation of TLS for UDP" > > Best Regards, > Meral > --- > Meral Shirazipour > Ericsson > Research > www.ericsson.com > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
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