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Document: draft-ietf-json-i-json-05
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2015-01-14
IETF LC End Date:  2015-01-14
IESG Telechat date: NA


Summary:
This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some 
comments .


Nits/editorial comments:
-Please spell out acronyms at first use. E.g. JSON, I-JSON

-[Page 3], "treat an integer", it would be good to mention this is still 
referring to IEEE754 format.

-[Page 3],"(one example would be 64-bit integers)", here not clear if still 
IEEE7544 is discussed or integer format. If latter, is it signed/unsigned.
"RECOMMENDED to encode them in JSON string values." should this be done in 
decimal format then?

-[Page 4], Section 3, "in the JSON messages it receives."--->"in the JSON 
messages they receives."

-[Page 4], "receiving implementation"---->"receiving implementations"

Best Regards,
Meral
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Meral Shirazipour
Ericsson
Research
www.ericsson.com
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