Thanks for your review, Meral. Have you authors observed the comments and taken all actions that you think are necessary?
FWIW, I have placed the following position on the ballot for tonight’s IESG call: No Objection - I should note that there was a Gen-ART review from Meral with some minor editorial observations. For instance, the first sentence of Section 3 could use improvement. These could be handled by the RFC Editor, too. jari On 14 Jan 2015, at 10:00, Meral Shirazipour <[email protected]> wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, > please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. > > Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may > receive. > > Document: draft-ietf-json-i-json-05 > Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour > Review Date: 2015-01-14 > IETF LC End Date: 2015-01-14 > IESG Telechat date: NA > > > Summary: > This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some > comments . > > > Nits/editorial comments: > -Please spell out acronyms at first use. E.g. JSON, I-JSON > > -[Page 3], "treat an integer", it would be good to mention this is still > referring to IEEE754 format. > > -[Page 3],"(one example would be 64-bit integers)", here not clear if still > IEEE7544 is discussed or integer format. If latter, is it signed/unsigned. > "RECOMMENDED to encode them in JSON string values." should this be done in > decimal format then? > > -[Page 4], Section 3, "in the JSON messages it receives."--->"in the JSON > messages they receives." > > -[Page 4], "receiving implementation"---->"receiving implementations" > > Best Regards, > Meral > --- > Meral Shirazipour > Ericsson > Research > www.ericsson.com > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
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