I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-stox-im-12.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20150226 IETF LC End Date: 20150302 IESG Telechat date: 20150305 Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - ToC page 2 and Appendix A page 11: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments - 1 page 2: even its meaning is obvious the abbrev IM is never introduced. - 1 page 3: the word groupchat does not belong formerly to the English language... - 4 page 5 (twice): acknowledgements -> acknowledgments - 8 page 8: signalling -> signaling - 11.2 page 10: the first informative reference is for a 2012 I-D. Regards [email protected] _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
