On 3/4/15 8:56 AM, Francis Dupont wrote:
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Document: draft-ietf-stox-im-12.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20150226
IETF LC End Date: 20150302
IESG Telechat date: 20150305
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
- ToC page 2 and Appendix A page 11: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments
- 1 page 2: even its meaning is obvious the abbrev IM is never
introduced.
- 1 page 3: the word groupchat does not belong formerly to the
English language...
- 4 page 5 (twice): acknowledgements -> acknowledgments
- 8 page 8: signalling -> signaling
- 11.2 page 10: the first informative reference is for a 2012 I-D.
Regards
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Thanks for the review, we'll address these points before publication.
Peter
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