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Document:draft-ietf-6man-predictable-fragment-id-09 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date:2015-09-09 IETF LC End Date:2015-09-09 IESG Telechat date: (if known) Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Informational RFC, but I have some editorial comments. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: -[Page 6] line 7, "the the Identification"--extra 'the'-->"the Identification" -[Page 15], Appendix A., "the the algorithm specified"-extra 'the'-->"the algorithm specified" -[Page 16], "(assumming the"--->"(assuming the" -[Page 16], would be useful to have figure captions if the message exchanges are figures as referred to in the text. -General, please spell out acronyms at first use, e.g. PRNG, DoS etc. Best Regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
