Hi, Thank you. Best, Meral
> -----Original Message----- > From: Fernando Gont [mailto:[email protected]] > Sent: Thursday, October 01, 2015 3:34 PM > To: Meral Shirazipour; draft-ietf-6man-predictable-fragment- > [email protected]; [email protected] > Subject: Re: Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-6man-predictable-fragment- > id-09 > > Hi, Meral, > > Thanks so much for your feedback! -- Please find my comments in-line... > > On 09/09/2015 01:44 PM, Meral Shirazipour wrote: > > Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Informational RFC, but > > I have some editorial comments. > > > > Major issues: > > > > Minor issues: > > > > Nits/editorial comments: -[Page 6] line 7, "the the > > Identification"--extra 'the'-->"the Identification" -[Page 15], > > Appendix A., "the the algorithm specified"-extra 'the'-->"the > > algorithm specified" -[Page 16], "(assumming the"--->"(assuming the" > > Will fix all these. > > > > -[Page 16], would be useful to have figure captions if the message > > exchanges are figures as referred to in the text. > > Will give it try... But I'm not sure a short caption could be of any use, > since > describing what the figure is about would be reather complex in a > single-liner... > But I will give it a try. > > > > > -General, please > > spell out acronyms at first use, e.g. PRNG, DoS etc. > > Will do. > > Thanks! > > Best regards, > -- > Fernando Gont > e-mail: [email protected] || [email protected] PGP Fingerprint: > 7809 84F5 322E 45C7 F1C9 3945 96EE A9EF D076 FFF1 > > _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
