Hi, Meral, Thanks so much for your feedback! -- Please find my comments in-line...
On 09/09/2015 01:44 PM, Meral Shirazipour wrote: > Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Informational RFC, > but I have some editorial comments. > > Major issues: > > Minor issues: > > Nits/editorial comments: -[Page 6] line 7, "the the > Identification"--extra 'the'-->"the Identification" -[Page 15], > Appendix A., "the the algorithm specified"-extra 'the'-->"the > algorithm specified" -[Page 16], "(assumming the"--->"(assuming the" Will fix all these. > -[Page 16], would be useful to have figure captions if the message > exchanges are figures as referred to in the text. Will give it try... But I'm not sure a short caption could be of any use, since describing what the figure is about would be reather complex in a single-liner... But I will give it a try. > -General, please > spell out acronyms at first use, e.g. PRNG, DoS etc. Will do. Thanks! Best regards, -- Fernando Gont e-mail: [email protected] || [email protected] PGP Fingerprint: 7809 84F5 322E 45C7 F1C9 3945 96EE A9EF D076 FFF1 _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
