OK, forget my suggestion. I have a difficulty to parse this sentence (second part)
It determines the downstream destination for unicast head-end replication and identifies the receiver ETR that needs to be notified should the root of the distribution tree move to another site. Lucy -----Original Message----- From: Dino Farinacci [mailto:[email protected]] Sent: Thursday, December 01, 2016 1:45 PM To: Lucy yong Cc: Jari Arkko; [email protected]; General Area Review Team; Stig Venaas Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-pim-join-attributes-for-lisp-05 > Could you make this sentence more readable? > > It determines the downstream destination for unicast head-end replication > and identifies the > receiver ETR that needs to be notified should the root of the > distribution tree move to another site. > > "should be", "moving”? I do not understand what you are suggesting. Write more words please. Dino _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
