Thank you, Dino. Good, I understand it now. Lucy
-----Original Message----- From: Dino Farinacci [mailto:[email protected]] Sent: Thursday, December 01, 2016 1:53 PM To: Lucy yong Cc: Jari Arkko; [email protected]; General Area Review Team; Stig Venaas Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-pim-join-attributes-for-lisp-05 > OK, forget my suggestion. I have a difficulty to parse this sentence > (second part) > > It determines the downstream destination for unicast head-end > replication and identifies the receiver ETR that needs to be notified > should the root of the distribution tree move to another site. > > Lucy First off, let’s include the entire paragraph: Knowledge of the receiver ETR's RLOC address is also essential to the control plane of the root ITR. It determines the downstream destination for unicast head-end replication and identifies the receiver ETR that needs to be notified should the root of the distribution tree move to another site. How about we change to this: Knowledge of the receiver ETR's RLOC address is also essential to the control plane of the root ITR. The RLOC address determines the downstream destination for unicast head-end replication and identifies the receiver ETR that needs to be notified should the root ITR of the distribution tree move to another site. The root ITR can change when the source EID is roaming to another LISP site. Dino > > -----Original Message----- > From: Dino Farinacci [mailto:[email protected]] > Sent: Thursday, December 01, 2016 1:45 PM > To: Lucy yong > Cc: Jari Arkko; > [email protected]; General Area > Review Team; Stig Venaas > Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Review: > draft-ietf-pim-join-attributes-for-lisp-05 > > >> Could you make this sentence more readable? >> >> It determines the downstream destination for unicast head-end >> replication and identifies the receiver ETR that needs to be >> notified should the root of the distribution tree move to another site. >> >> "should be", "moving”? > > I do not understand what you are suggesting. Write more words please. > > Dino > > _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
