> Could you make this sentence more readable?
> 
>   It determines the downstream destination for unicast head-end replication 
> and identifies the
>   receiver ETR that needs to be notified should the root of the
>   distribution tree move to another site.
> 
> "should be", "moving”?

I do not understand what you are suggesting. Write more words please.

Dino


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