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Document: draft-ietf-nfsv4-rpcrdma-bidirection-06
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2017-02-07
IETF LC End Date:   2017-02-07
IESG Telechat date: -


Summary:
This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have comments.

Major issues:
Minor issues:
Nits/editorial comments:
-General: please consider spelling out acronyms at first use and use the 
acronym consistently thereafter.
-[Page 6], "(ie. a "---->"(i.e., a"


Best Regards,
Meral
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Meral Shirazipour
Ericsson Research
www.ericsson.com
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