Hi, Thank you. Best, Meral
> -----Original Message----- > From: Chuck Lever [mailto:[email protected]] > Sent: Tuesday, February 07, 2017 12:26 PM > To: Meral Shirazipour <[email protected]> > Cc: [email protected]; [email protected] > Subject: Re: Gen-ART Last Call review of > draft-ietf-nfsv4-rpcrdma-bidirection-06 > > > > On Feb 7, 2017, at 2:45 PM, Meral Shirazipour > <[email protected]> wrote: > > > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review > Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the > IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call > comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > > > > > Document: draft-ietf-nfsv4-rpcrdma-bidirection-06 > > Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour > > Review Date: 2017-02-07 > > IETF LC End Date: 2017-02-07 > > IESG Telechat date: - > > > > > > Summary: > > This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have > comments. > > > > Major issues: > > Minor issues: > > Nits/editorial comments: > > -General: please consider spelling out acronyms at first use and use the > acronym consistently thereafter. > > To address this comment (and Jouni's related LC comment) I've introduced the > following forward definitions: > > - RPC = Remote Procedure Call > > - RDMA = Remote Direct Memory Access > > - RPC-over-RDMA - defined by citation > > - NFS = Network File System > > - XDR - removed all usage > > - XID = RPC transaction ID, and capitalized consistently > > - NULL probe - replaced with "RPC NULL procedure" > > - ULP - replaced with "RPC Program" > > - Chunks - defined before use, and added citation > > > Please let me know if there are other unfamiliar terms I've missed, or if > there is a > particular inconsistent usage that should be corrected. > > > > -[Page 6], "(ie. a "---->"(i.e., a" > > Fixed. > > -- > Chuck Lever > > _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
