(trimming receipients) Dale, are we good, or do we need to go through another iteration?
Kind regards, Job On Mon, May 22, 2017 at 06:28:11PM -0400, Hankins, Greg (Nokia - US) wrote: > On Mon, May 22, 2017 at 04:29:06PM -0400, Dale R. Worley wrote: > >I suspect my problems come from not realizing there has been a change of > >focus. (It may be much clearer to routing people.) So I would suggest > >expanding the title of Appendix A to "Transition Considerations for > >Vendors of BGP Implementations". > > Hi Dale, how about simply "Transition Considerations for BGP Implementers" as > there are many excellent FOSS implementations in addition to implementations > sold by vendors? > > > For an implementer, transitioning to a compliant BGP implementation > > may require a software development and release process that can take > > several years. > > > >Perhaps "a software development and release" can be omitted. > > Updated: For an implementer, transitioning to a compliant BGP implementation > may require a process that can take several years. > > >> This document updates [RFC4271] so that routes are neither imported nor > >> exported unless specifically enabled by configuration. The solution > >> reduces the consequences of these problems, and improves the default level > >> of Internet routing security. > > > >In that case, I'd start the second sentence with "This change ..." or > >perhaps "This update ..." -- nothing has previously been labeled a > >"solution", so the reader has to search a bit to determine the > >antecedent. > > Updated: This change reduces the consequences of these problems, and improves > the default level of Internet routing security. > > We'll wait to send a new diff in case there are further comments. > > Kind regards, > Greg > > -- > Greg Hankins <[email protected]> > Senior Product Manager > IP/Optical Networks, Nokia > > _______________________________________________ > GROW mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/grow _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
