done!

On Fri, May 26, 2017 at 5:55 PM, Warren Kumari <[email protected]> wrote:
> On Thu, May 25, 2017 at 6:35 PM, Job Snijders <[email protected]> wrote:
>> (trimming receipients)
>>
>> Dale, are we good, or do we need to go through another iteration?
>
> I'm not Dale, but it sounds to me like there is agreement, so upload a
> new version.
>
> I think that the new text improves the document, thanks for the review!
> W
>
>>
>> Kind regards,
>>
>> Job
>>
>> On Mon, May 22, 2017 at 06:28:11PM -0400, Hankins, Greg (Nokia - US) wrote:
>>> On Mon, May 22, 2017 at 04:29:06PM -0400, Dale R. Worley wrote:
>>> >I suspect my problems come from not realizing there has been a change of
>>> >focus.  (It may be much clearer to routing people.)  So I would suggest
>>> >expanding the title of Appendix A to "Transition Considerations for
>>> >Vendors of BGP Implementations".
>>>
>>> Hi Dale, how about simply "Transition Considerations for BGP Implementers" 
>>> as
>>> there are many excellent FOSS implementations in addition to implementations
>>> sold by vendors?
>>>
>>> >    For an implementer, transitioning to a compliant BGP implementation
>>> >    may require a software development and release process that can take
>>> >    several years.
>>> >
>>> >Perhaps "a software development and release" can be omitted.
>>>
>>> Updated: For an implementer, transitioning to a compliant BGP implementation
>>> may require a process that can take several years.
>>>
>>> >> This document updates [RFC4271] so that routes are neither imported nor
>>> >> exported unless specifically enabled by configuration.  The solution
>>> >> reduces the consequences of these problems, and improves the default 
>>> >> level
>>> >> of Internet routing security.
>>> >
>>> >In that case, I'd start the second sentence with "This change ..." or
>>> >perhaps "This update ..." -- nothing has previously been labeled a
>>> >"solution", so the reader has to search a bit to determine the
>>> >antecedent.
>>>
>>> Updated: This change reduces the consequences of these problems, and 
>>> improves
>>> the default level of Internet routing security.
>>>
>>> We'll wait to send a new diff in case there are further comments.
>>>
>>> Kind regards,
>>> Greg
>>>
>>> --
>>> Greg Hankins <[email protected]>
>>> Senior Product Manager
>>> IP/Optical Networks, Nokia
>>>
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>
>
> --
> I don't think the execution is relevant when it was obviously a bad
> idea in the first place.
> This is like putting rabid weasels in your pants, and later expressing
> regret at having chosen those particular rabid weasels and that pair
> of pants.
>    ---maf

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