You may want to use a word other than "anomalous". Good word in general though. :)
I would break up large paragraphs into bulleted pages since this is a presentation (e.g., page 12, Benefits of OSS). Otherwise, this is an excellent start. Good job. ----- Original Message ----- From: "Ryan McCain" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> To: <[email protected]>; <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> Sent: Saturday, May 21, 2005 7:06 PM Subject: Re: [brlug-general] Open Source Presentation so far... feedback needed Here ya go.. http://www.jordanmayer.net/oss/OpenSource_NG.ppt Thanks, Ryan -------------------------------------- Ryan McCain Northrop Grumman Corporation Linux System Administrator 3 email: [EMAIL PROTECTED] Phone: 225.219.0556 Fax: 225.219.0540 Registered Linux User #364609 >>> [EMAIL PROTECTED] 05/21/05 6:24 PM >>> Can you save that as a PowerPoint too? I only have Office. ----- Original Message ----- From: "Ryan McCain" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> To: <[email protected]> Sent: Saturday, May 21, 2005 5:55 PM Subject: [brlug-general] Open Source Presentation so far... feedback needed It's still a mess, but looking for other peoples feedback. Remember, the audience is the Executive level. http://www.jordanmayer.net/oss/OpenSource_NG.sxi Thanks, Ryan -------------------------------------- Ryan McCain Northrop Grumman Corporation Linux System Administrator 3 email: [EMAIL PROTECTED] Phone: 225.219.0556 Fax: 225.219.0540 Registered Linux User #364609 _______________________________________________ General mailing list [email protected] http://brlug.net/mailman/listinfo/general_brlug.net _______________________________________________ General mailing list [email protected] http://brlug.net/mailman/listinfo/general_brlug.net _______________________________________________ General mailing list [email protected] http://brlug.net/mailman/listinfo/general_brlug.net
