>>>>> On Tue, 15 Aug 2017, Francisco Blas Izquierdo Riera (klondike) wrote:
> Updated the news item following comments from dilfridge, mrueg and > floppym. Also made it display to users of hardened profiles. Some very minor comments: > Author: Francisco Blas Izquierdo Riera (klondike) <[email protected]> Format of the line is "Real Name <email@address>", so I'd suggest to drop the nick in parentheses, especially since it is there in the e-mail address anyway. > Because of that we will be masking the hardened-sources on the 27th of > August and will proceed to remove then from the tree by the end of > September. [...] s/then/them/ > As an alternative, for users happy keeping themselves on the stable > 4.9 branch of the kernel minipli, another Grsec user, is forward > porting the patches on [3]. I had difficulties parsing this sentence. Insert a comma after "kernel"? Also there is spurious whitespace before "stable". Ulrich
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