gtully commented on code in PR #4938:
URL: https://github.com/apache/activemq-artemis/pull/4938#discussion_r1603205084


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docs/user-manual/federation-address.adoc:
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 :idprefix:
 :idseparator: -
 
-Address federation is like full multicast over the connected brokers, in that 
every message sent to address  on `Broker-A` will be delivered to every queue 
on that broker, but like wise will be delivered to `Broker-B`  and all attached 
queues there.
+Address federation is similar to full multicast over the connected brokers. 
Every message sent to address on `Broker-A` will be delivered to every queue on 
that broker, but also will be delivered to `Broker-B` and all their attached 
queues.
 
 Address federation dynamically links to other addresses in upstream or 
downstream brokers.
-It automatically creates a queue on the remote address for itself,  to which 
then it consumes, copying to the local address, as though they were published 
directly to it.
+It automatically creates a queue on the remote address for itself, which it 
then consumes and copies to the local address, as if they were published 
directly to it.
 
-The upstream brokers do not need to be reconfigured or the address, simply 
permissions to the address need to be  given to the address for the downstream 
broker.
-Similarly the same applies for downstream configurations.
+Upstream brokers or addresses do not need to be reconfigured. Just add needed 
permissions to the address for the downstream broker. Same applies for 
downstream configurations.

Review Comment:
   "the needed"



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